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Re: The Unforgiven
*'twas but a lucky guess* Vincent continued to drag Lucinda towards the back room, but let go when she struggled. "Fine, fine," he said, giggling, "I won't make you go ...
Jan 17, 2009 -
Re: The Unforgiven
Although he did not show it, Vincent was genuinely surprised. He was not surprised at Lucinda's suggestion, or her claim of keeping a stock of human blood to drink, rather ...
Jan 17, 2009 -
Re: The Unforgiven
"You see, Lucinda?" Vincent said when Kathleen and Zire left the room, "I have one hundred percent control over everyone in my clan. They wouldn't dare to defy my will. ...
Jan 17, 2009 -
Re: The Unforgiven
Vincent stood up, as did Lucinda. He instinctively put his hand on his sword, but withdrew it, confident in his diplomacy skills. "Enemy? Hah, well, if that's what you want ...
Jan 16, 2009 -
Re: Demons
Thank you for your reviews. You imply earlier that they are dark and evil creatures. White is a color of purity. You make them sound like Angels. The contrast is ...
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: Demons
They lurk in the dark places of the human domain, most are hidden in the abyss, imprisoned by the firm waves above, many lurk in shallower places, their tentacles pull ...
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: The Unforgiven
As Lucinda spoke, Vincent heard a distant noise in the background. He was certain it was a human scream. Luckily, Lucinda didn't seem to have noticed. "Well...I didn't really have ...
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: The Unforgiven
Vincent stared at Evie for a second, before turning back to Lucinda. "Lucinda, I presume you are aware of the great Human wars of the early 20th century?" She nodded. ...
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: The Unforgiven
Vincent stroked Lucinda's hair away from her ears, leaning in. "I want kill yourself." Although Lucinda made a valiant attempt at keeping a straight face, Vincent could sense her fear. ...
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: ALove amongst the spheres delivers the mountain & the me
There's something very special about this poem. I don't know what, maybe it's the slight abstractness of it, maybe it's the fact that it's on a huge level (if taken ...
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: The Unforgiven
Vincent wandered through the castle's dark halls without purpose. His mind, it seemed, was as dark and melancholy as the ancient structure he inhabited. Three centures of experiences, good and ...
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: The Chirstmas Caravaan
Petey Petey carried out his orders, though his mind was elsewhere. He waited around for further orders, flying around a bit for exercise, whistling an old tune. Eventually, his agitated ...
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: The Demise of the gods.
The first sentiences crawled through a void. creatio ex nihilio. They looked for eachother, but there was no light. They listened for eachother, but there was no sound. But they ...
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: Love <3
Welcome to YWS! Firstly, it's worth saying that love poems are very common on YWS, so it's difficult to post one here and get an excellent review. Many people here ...
Jan 9, 2009 -
Re: Gravity
Thank you dear friends, you did great things for me, you did great things to me, I have repaid my debts, but our good deeds have lifted the barriers. The ...
Jan 7, 2009
